Write On Wednesdays Exercise 13 – A Great One Liner… This week you need to come up with one good line to describe a part of your day. It can be ‘real life’ or fiction. But it must tell us ‘who did what’. It has to be an amazing line, like a tiny little paper plane that must travel a big distance (figuratively speaking) with only a few folds … Every word in that line must earn its place, or be cut as excess baggage. Let’s get thinking about each sentence as though every word counts, like working one group of muscles to show how much weight they can carry.
Tinny carnival music played in my ears as I sat with my teeth grinding, on the ferris wheel, both of us wobbling slightly in the wind.